KIA Ora and welcome back to my blog today I will be showing you my Writing for this week. This week in writing we did a story about the umbrella story.The umbrella story is a story that bases around empathy. Empathy means when you put your self in someone else's shoes. I hope you enjoy reading my chunk on the umbrella story.
have you watch the umbrella story?
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia Ora Sophie,
ReplyDeleteI love the way you have chosen a good background so I can see the writing.
Maybe next time you could make the doc bigger.
I also love the way you have added a question and the end of the umbrella blog post.
Yes I do know about the Umbrella story.
Keep up the good work.
Francesca.
Thank you Francesca for the feedback I will try to take that on next time.
ReplyDelete-Sophie Lingard
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