KIA Ora and welcome back to my blog. Today I will be showing you my writing I have been working on for a while. The story is called King Aegeus and the Minotaur It has 1 to 11 days on the google doc I hope you enjoy it.
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
KIA Ora and welcome back to my blog. Today I will be showing you my writing I have been working on for a while. The story is called King Aegeus and the Minotaur It has 1 to 11 days on the google doc I hope you enjoy it.
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Kia ora Sophie,
ReplyDeleteHine here great job on your writing maybe next time you can make it bigger so we can read it better but great job finishing your writing. maybe next time you can put the background white instead of blue. nice font what did you put it as. I like how you put commas and full stop at the end.